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		<title>Comment on A Simple Novel Outline &#8211; 9 questions for 25 chapters by Writing &#124; Pearltrees</title>
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		<dc:creator>Writing &#124; Pearltrees</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jan 2012 21:26:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] What are you trying to say? Why are you writing this particular story? 9.) What sacrifice levels the playing field? A Simple Novel Outline - 9 questions for 25 chapters &amp; H.E. Roulo - StumbleUpon [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on A Simple Novel Outline &#8211; 9 questions for 25 chapters by Aspiring Writers &#171; evomusing</title>
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		<dc:creator>Aspiring Writers &#171; evomusing</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Jan 2012 17:03:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] A Simple Novel Outline &#8211; Nine Questions for Twenty-Five Chapters [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Kindle Publishing Strategies &#8211; The short story test by admin</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Jan 2012 06:52:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Actually, there are many, many markets for erotic stories. Search duotrope.com and you&#039;ll find publishers looking for just that on an ongoing basis. There are also themed anthologies looking for erotic stories. I&#039;m writing a new blog post about finding markets for short stories. I&#039;ll post it in the next day or two. 
Let me know how it goes. and good luck!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Actually, there are many, many markets for erotic stories. Search duotrope.com and you&#8217;ll find publishers looking for just that on an ongoing basis. There are also themed anthologies looking for erotic stories. I&#8217;m writing a new blog post about finding markets for short stories. I&#8217;ll post it in the next day or two.<br />
Let me know how it goes. and good luck!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Kindle Publishing Strategies &#8211; The short story test by admin</title>
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		<dc:creator>admin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Jan 2012 06:49:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I know how you feel. Kindle publishing is a great way to put work out there, but unfortunately unless you have a way to market your work, you may not get the level of feedback you&#039;re looking for. I wonder whether you&#039;ve tried submitting specifically to anthologies or themed magazines? They tend to respond more quickly than other markets, since they have a firm cutoff date. Also, since you know precisely what type of story they&#039;re looking for, you can get a better sense of whether it&#039;s the subject matter, style of writing, or something else holding you back.
 
You won&#039;t want to hear this, but having a critique or writing group can help. I&#039;m more into online options, and recently discovered Book Country as a good option for putting my work in front of a smart community of writers. It&#039;s free, but you have to critique to get critiques.

Keep it up. Remember, we get better with everything we write. I&#039;m making up a new blog post about submitting short stories, since I know a lot of us are struggling with finding the right place for our stories.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I know how you feel. Kindle publishing is a great way to put work out there, but unfortunately unless you have a way to market your work, you may not get the level of feedback you&#8217;re looking for. I wonder whether you&#8217;ve tried submitting specifically to anthologies or themed magazines? They tend to respond more quickly than other markets, since they have a firm cutoff date. Also, since you know precisely what type of story they&#8217;re looking for, you can get a better sense of whether it&#8217;s the subject matter, style of writing, or something else holding you back.</p>
<p>You won&#8217;t want to hear this, but having a critique or writing group can help. I&#8217;m more into online options, and recently discovered Book Country as a good option for putting my work in front of a smart community of writers. It&#8217;s free, but you have to critique to get critiques.</p>
<p>Keep it up. Remember, we get better with everything we write. I&#8217;m making up a new blog post about submitting short stories, since I know a lot of us are struggling with finding the right place for our stories.</p>
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		<title>Comment on A Simple Novel Outline &#8211; 9 questions for 25 chapters by admin</title>
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		<dc:creator>admin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Jan 2012 06:41:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Talent can only do so much, you also need to put in time and effort. Choosing any kind of scaffolding to begin a story idea can be enough to allow that talent to be expressed.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Talent can only do so much, you also need to put in time and effort. Choosing any kind of scaffolding to begin a story idea can be enough to allow that talent to be expressed.</p>
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		<title>Comment on A Simple Novel Outline &#8211; 9 questions for 25 chapters by Richard Blake</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Blake</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Jan 2012 06:02:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If writers like Twain, Hemmingway, Dickens or even Bronte had used the above approach I suspect they would never have published a single book. Talented writers don&#039;t need a prescription to produce great works.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If writers like Twain, Hemmingway, Dickens or even Bronte had used the above approach I suspect they would never have published a single book. Talented writers don&#8217;t need a prescription to produce great works.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Kindle Publishing Strategies &#8211; The short story test by Samuel R. Wright</title>
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		<dc:creator>Samuel R. Wright</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2011 08:06:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for this.  I have been working on short stories for some time and have a collection of rejection letters to show for them.  But have been told that my writing is very good.  So this option was mentioned to me.   Before signing up, I thought I would look for people with opinions, like yours, and see what YOU had to say.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for this.  I have been working on short stories for some time and have a collection of rejection letters to show for them.  But have been told that my writing is very good.  So this option was mentioned to me.   Before signing up, I thought I would look for people with opinions, like yours, and see what YOU had to say.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Kindle Publishing Strategies &#8211; The short story test by K Lov</title>
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		<dc:creator>K Lov</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Dec 2011 21:44:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi I have a short erotic story I wrote and I&#039;m new at getting my writing out to public view,so I don&#039;t have a clue where to start.
Thanks K Lov</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi I have a short erotic story I wrote and I&#8217;m new at getting my writing out to public view,so I don&#8217;t have a clue where to start.<br />
Thanks K Lov</p>
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		<title>Comment on 8 Novel Editing Steps &#8211; The Basic Overview by admin</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Dec 2011 22:11:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You bet! I&#039;ve read a lot of advice on editing, especially about eliminating words, but your lists and examples let us see the advice applied.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You bet! I&#8217;ve read a lot of advice on editing, especially about eliminating words, but your lists and examples let us see the advice applied.</p>
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		<title>Comment on 8 Novel Editing Steps &#8211; The Basic Overview by Laura Drake</title>
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		<dc:creator>Laura Drake</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Dec 2011 21:45:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the shout out to Writers in the Storm!</description>
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